Character Creation

Ok, so I've been working on creating a new fantasy world for the last couple days.  I've finally started working on the first story that goes with this new fantasy world.  The following is the basic characters that the story will revolve around.  Haven't worked out all the kinks yet (character names may change), so there may be flaws here haha.  Oh by the way, for you writers out there, if you haven't found this website yet, I highly recommend it  -- it helped me a ton:
http://fantasynamegenerators.com/

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the characters I created.  Leave a comment so I know what you think.  Enjoy:

Characters:

Illum:

Black, greasy hair gently hangs over a long, warm face.  Smart blue eyes watch vigilantly over his friends.  Scars stretching from just under his left eyebrow, running towards his right nostril and ending on his right cheekbone leaves a grievous memory of a prior duel.  There’s something captivating about him; perhaps it’s his goodwill or perhaps it’s simply his warmth.  But nonetheless, people tend to befriend him, while trying to please him.  Illum was once the servant of the Bruqon family, but became the harpist in King Yurid’s court.  While working in King Yurid’s court, Illum befriended Prince Maollan.  King Yurid ordered Illum’s capture for treason soon after.  Illum then fled to all the holds within the Kingdom of Abatral, until he finally sailed from Iakko to the Aquos Island.  He travels with his two closest friends Randle and Perseus. 

Randle:

Dark brown, shaggy hair reveals a friendly face.  Gentle brown eyes, set sunken within their sockets, watch slowly over the friends he’s been with for so long.  He has a sturdy frame and stands average among others.  There’s something obscure about him.  Perhaps it’s his tenderness or perhaps it’s simply his clumsiness.  But nonetheless, people tend to take pride in knowing him as a friend.  Randle is one of the two close friends of Illum.  Randle is often the comic relief of the group, making light of situations.

Perseus:

Chestnut hair hangs over a skinny, charming face.  Woeful brown eyes, set narrowly within their sockets, watch yearningly over the people they’ve cared for for so long.  A scar reaching from the right side of the forehead, running across the nose and ending on his upper lip leaves a heartbreaking memory of companionship.  He stands average among others.  There’s something bewildering about him; perhaps it’s his feeling of longingness or his feelings of sadness.  Perseus is one of the two close friends of Illum.  Perseus is often the voice of reason in the group, always able to give wise advice. 

Maollan:

Blonde, perfectly groomed hair awkwardly hangs over a soft, warm face.  Piercing hazel eyes, set low within their sockets, watch eagerly over the lands and people that he loves.  Dark stubble seductively compliments his eyes and cheekbones.  He has scars just under the left eye, running towards the right side of his lips and ending on his left nostril, leaves a painful reminder of a lost battle.  Prince Maollan is the son of Yurid, and the crown prince.  Maollan has had a troubled past, but when he became friends with Illum many years ago, his life was turned around.  Maollan lives a difficult life, and his future is uncertain. 

Yurid:

Silver, long hair hangs over a bony, time-worn face.  Blood-shot hazel eyes, set lightly within their sockets, watch heartily over the chaos he has created.  Old, wrinkly skin evilly compliments his actions during his life.   King Yurid is the ruler of the Kingdom of Abatral.  He has ruled for the past twenty years with an iron fist as a tyrant.  He wishes to see the entire world under his grasp. 

Yarmik:

Black, long hair tied in a ponytail reveal a menacing face.  Dead hazel eyes, set elegantly within their sockets, watch vigilantly over Abatral’s enemies.  A sword mark reaching from under the right eye, running towards his right-nostril and ending on his left cheekbone leaves a grievous reminder of a troubled past.  There is something incomprehensible about him; perhaps it’s his attitude or perhaps it’s simply his suffering.  But nonetheless, people tend to shower him with praises, while trying to hide from him.  Yarmik is the leader of Yurid’s Black Hand, or assassins.  Yarmik has been hunting down Illum for years, under orders to kill those with him and to bring Illum before Yurid.

Roland:

Golden wavy hair tied in a ponytail reveals a lean, menacing face.  Expressive brown eyes, set charmingly within their sockets, watch yearningly over the King they’ve sworn to protect.  A scar reaching from just under the right eyebrow, running towards is upper lip and ending on his upper lip leaves a grievous memory of his ex-love.  This is the face of Commander Roland, the officer in charge of the Royal Guard in the capital of Enochai.  He is the right hand of King Yurid.  People tend to brag about knowing him, while secretly despising him.  Roland despises Illum, as he believes he is the leader of the rebellion, and thus the reason that his ex-lover left him. 

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